Rhetorical Analysis
Outline
Introduction: The
hot topic recently set forth in the beginning of June of 2012, when the
Anti-Doping agency charged Lance Armstrong with Doping and trafficking
performance enhancing drugs. The article "Legacy at stake: Lance
Armstrong's legal fight against doping charges". This is written by CNN’s
Alex Bath who’s a sports journalist at CNN. The author’s main goals in the
article are to inform readers about the topic and you need to take your own
stance on the subject.
Thesis: A close
analysis of the Article "Legacy at stake: Lance Armstrong's legal fight
against doping charges" written August 24th 2012. Charges against
Armstrong for Doping were set in June of 2012. To me leads to a very unpersuasive
article for readers but allows you to take your own standpoint on the situation.
Audience: Audience:
The publisher of the Article was CNN. The author is writing to the general
public i know this because in the article he’s not referring to anything or
anyone he is more so just trying to inform the readers.
Background Info about
Lance: During the peak of his career, what seemed to be so perfect wasn’t.
Lance was diagnosed with testicular cancer which spread from there to his lungs
and brain. Despite doctors giving him a 50-50 chance of living he immediately
began chemotherapy and other special treatments recommend. His results began to
improve rapidly and as an effect he thought more and more about getting back on
his bike. After Lance’s miraculous recovery from cancer and return to cycling
he won seven consecutive Tour De France titles from 1999-2005. Lance retired
from the sport in 2005 after his final championship but his work still
continues to inspire people to this day. The reason is he partnered up with
Nike to form the yellow Live Strong wrist band which has become a sign of hope
to many in hard times.
Logos:
Discuss Structure of essay: The structure
of this article is kind of written in a chronological order from the first
event, moment, or step to last event, moment, or step. Throughout the body of
the essay the writer has a topic such as “what are the charges” then he
branches off of that telling the reader what they are. The author then goes
into his next topic such as what is the USADA and continues to repeat this
process throughout the paper.
Provide roadmap of the essay’s
organization/logic for your readers
(who we are pretending have never read the essay). 2. Do so by
describing how the essay opens, how it unfolds, and how it concludes: The introduction opens with a very short
narrative about how Lance is fighting to keep his seven Tour De France titles as
well as keep his reputation as one of the sport’s most premier athletes. Stated
earlier the author then starts to write the paper chronologically from the
first event, moment, or step to last event, moment, or step. The end of the
article doesn’t have a conclusion, leaving the reader to form his own opinion
about the article and situation.
Evaluate argument’s structure: conclude this
section by commenting on how intended audience might respond to the argument’s
overall structure. * Note strengths as well as possible weaknesses: The
article as a whole really only has one argument and it is whether or not Lance
doped during his seven years of winning the Tour De France. The argument is
presented to the reader in the beginning of the writing. Some of the strengths
of the argument is it provides the fact that he has passed 500 tests over 20
years of competition. Weaknesses of the
argument is that several of Lances teammates from the United States Postal
Service Team (USPS). Two doctors and a trainer have been suspended as well that
were part of Lances USPS team.
Describe what kinds of argument they
are–definition, causal, evaluation, proposal–and how these arguments fit in the
overall argument: The article really only offers one type of argument which
is causal. This is because this particular argument looks at the primary cause,
which is if Lance was doping or not.
Describe how the
author supports these claims–what reasons he/she offers: The author really
supports these claims by going on in detail about different facts like how all
the drug test he’s taken and passed and the author provides both sides of the
story I think but ultimately leaves it to the reader to decide if Lance doped
or not.
Provide a handful
of specific examples of representative (key and clear) instances of the
author’s reasoning–how he/she links reasons to a claim: "Lance has
passed nearly 500 tests over 20 years of competition,". On the other side the author provides
examples that he was doping like “Along
with the cyclist, several members of Armstrong's former team were charged.
These included Luis Garcia del Moral and Michele Ferrari, both team doctors,
trainer Jose "Pepe" Marti, team physician Pedro Celaya and Johan
Bruyneel.”
Discuss Kinds of
evidence used: throughout the article several types of evidence was used
such as facts about Armstrong, facts about his teammates and other cyclists
that have faced similar situations.
Provide a few key
examples of different types of evidence: Lance has passed over 500
drug tests in 20 years. Some others are, the USADA alleges that Armstrong took
steroids throughout his career, and says it has testimony from former teammates
to support the charges. the organization has refused to reveal who has provided
the evidence.
Analyze each
example briefly: discuss how the author uses that type and/or specific bit of
evidence to persuade readers: the first example is simple and states how
many drug tests Lance has passed over the years. The author uses this as a
begin to persuade the reader that he hasn’t doped. Later on in the article the
author provides a statement from the USADA stating that Lance’s teammates came
forth and testified against Lance.
Evaluate
argument’s evidence: conclude this section by commenting on how the intended
audience will likely respond, overall, to the author’s use of different forms
of evidence and the quality and quantity of that evidence. * Note strengths as
well as possible weaknesses: The audience will probably respond in different
ways due to how the author wrote the paper allowing the readers to form their own
opinion on the subject using pieces of evidence from the standpoint Lance is
innocent and from the standpoint his guilty using the USADA information.
IV. Ethos
Discuss briefly
author’s extrinsic ethos: how it is established, how it contributes to the
author’s character/credibility, and how it might influence the intended
audience: the authors ethos is established in the beginning of the paper
showing he has credibility because it is published on CNN which is a highly
looked upon news source.
Provide a few key
examples of how the author builds his/her ethos throughout the argument:
Analyze each
example briefly: discuss how the author uses that strategy to persuade readers:
Evaluate author’s
ethos: conclude this section by commenting on how the intended audience will
likely respond, overall, to the author’s ethos. * Note strengths as well as
possible weaknesses:
Pathos
Discuss author’s
appeals to pathos: appeals to intended audience’s emotions, values,
assumptions, sense of identity:
Provide a few key
examples of how the author uses pathos in different ways to persuade his/her
intended audience:
Analyze each
example briefly: discuss how the author uses that particular strategy to elicit
certain responses/feelings from readers:
Evaluate author’s
use of pathos appeals: conclude this section by commenting on how the intended
audience will likely respond, overall, to the author’s appeals to pathos. *
Note strengths as well as possible weaknesses:
VI. Counter-arguments
and qualifiers:
Discuss briefly
how, where, and why the author might qualify main claims of his/her argument in
crucial ways and what effect these qualifications might have on the reader:
Discuss more fully
how the author addresses counter-arguments, concessions, and refutations:
Provide a few key
examples of how the author addresses counter-arguments to persuade his/her
intended audience:
Analyze each
example briefly: discuss how the author handles the counter-argument (how
respectful he/she is to the opposition, how much he/she concedes and refutes)
and what effect these strategies have on readers:
Evaluate author’s
use of counter-arguments, concessions, and refutations: conclude this section
by commenting on how the intended audience will likely respond, overall, to the
author’s treatment of the opposition and its arguments. * Note strengths as well as possible
weaknesses:
VII. Conclusion
Concluding
paragraph should highlight the argument’s strengths and weaknesses (as concerns
the intended audience):
After weighing
strengths and weaknesses, offer a final evaluation of the argument’s overall
persuasiveness relative to the intended audience:
I really liked how much pre work you have already accomplished just in your outline. It really shows the reader that you have already put in a lot of time and thought into this outline and thats great! although i did notice that some of areas were still untouched, but im sure that will only come with more knowledge about your article. Great job, it looks great.
ReplyDeleteI like how thorough your outline is and how it looks like you know exactly what to write about. I also like how you included "analyze briefly.." or "discuss fully..." to remind yourself which sections will need more support and that will make your paper more effective and easier for readers to understand.
ReplyDeleteYour outline looks really good! I like how much detail you put into it, it will make the paper so much easier to write when the time comes! You have come up with some really great examples of what you will be putting in your paper.
ReplyDeleteGreat Job Chevy, It really looks like you put in a lot of work into your outline. It really shows that your dedicated to your paper!! Although I feel its a little vague when it comes to your paper in particular. Otherwise Great Job!
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